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I look up from feverishly typing on the computer. 'Then he….' I typed down. Then I found myself unable to think. I couldn't think or remember what came next. My mind was completely blank. 'Then he…' what? Typing my screenplay was harder than I thought. And Adam was on my mind. How was I supposed to work with that on my mind? I had it all thought up, I honestly did, but I just couldn't remember. What was next? I heard a loud chord from the room next door. And I thought it was sound-proofed. There was a yell. The only thing I could make out of it was "It's offensive to Adam!" and a door slam. I couldn't make sense of it. I put the computer on my lap on the floor, and got up and walked across to the next room. "I can hear you guys, you know." I noticed Barry wasn't here. "Well, then, Naomi, tell him!" Brad yelled. "I'm sorry, tell who what? I only heard, like, the last two sentences." "Tell Neil we can't write this!" Brad stood up, and held up a sheet, thrusting it in my face so hard that it whipped back and forth with the force. I read through the sheet, which was in lyrics format.
Your bottle's almost empty,
You know this can't go on,
Because of you, my mind is always racing.
The needles break in your skin,
The scar is sinking in,
And now your trip begins, but its all over for,
It's all over for you, for you,
When you're on the edge and falling off,
And its all over.
Was all that was written. So far. But it was true. All of this was true. So how could I object it? "Well," I began, but Brad already knew that tone. "What do you mean, WELL?!" He yelled. Brad didn't usually get mad, so this was pretty surprising. "This… this is offensive! It's rude! It's mean! I… and you know that it's about Adam! Think about that! And it's not even finished! Imagine, it could turn out so insulting, and you're okaying it?!" "But that's the thing. It's true. The emotions in it are true. So… Besides, Adam's a good spirit, I'm sure he'll-" But Brad already knew what he was going to say. "But what if he isn't?" The silence that followed was awkward. And I hated it. Being a generally happy and optimistic person, I hated it. "He will. He'll accept it. I know he will." "Fine. I guess we'll go with your opinion. You know him the best." I nodded and laughed. "I sure hope so."
Your bottle's almost empty,
You know this can't go on,
Because of you, my mind is always racing.
The needles break in your skin,
The scar is sinking in,
And now your trip begins, but its all over for,
It's all over for you, for you,
When you're on the edge and falling off,
And its all over.
Was all that was written. So far. But it was true. All of this was true. So how could I object it? "Well," I began, but Brad already knew that tone. "What do you mean, WELL?!" He yelled. Brad didn't usually get mad, so this was pretty surprising. "This… this is offensive! It's rude! It's mean! I… and you know that it's about Adam! Think about that! And it's not even finished! Imagine, it could turn out so insulting, and you're okaying it?!" "But that's the thing. It's true. The emotions in it are true. So… Besides, Adam's a good spirit, I'm sure he'll-" But Brad already knew what he was going to say. "But what if he isn't?" The silence that followed was awkward. And I hated it. Being a generally happy and optimistic person, I hated it. "He will. He'll accept it. I know he will." "Fine. I guess we'll go with your opinion. You know him the best." I nodded and laughed. "I sure hope so."
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Three Days Grace Poem
Three Days Grace
Just Because im On My Own
Doesn't mean its Never Too Late
To change this Animal I Have Become
Before i start a Riot
And hopefully i will Get Out Alive
So i guess its Now Or Never
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Teenagers
When some one says teenagers you automatically think yobs, ASBOs, loud, noisy, a nuisance, vandals or thieves. Well, most of us are not. It's bad enough that some of us behave like that but to be grouped with them, that's just plain insulting.
A teen or teenager is a person between 13 and 19 years of age. Generally a teenager leaves school at 16 and goes into higher education, can get a job at 16, apply for a drivers' license at 17, vote at 18 and leave for university at 18. At 18 a teenager is legally considered an adult. All teenagers behave different so don't treat us all the same.
Teenagers have a totally different culture to adults. It
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The MCR song
Somewhere over the rainbow,
Way up high...
There's a floating Fwankie
In the sky!
And in the forest down below,
Bob's being swallowed
By Ray's A-fro!
And in the lucious fields of black,
Gee's hair is making a comeback!
And before you go,
Just thought we'd let you know,
Dearest Mikey is here too
In an Elebrapegacorn petting zoo!
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NOTE: This is from Naomi’s point in view this time, instead of Adam’s. I’m sorry, it’s just that, I couldn’t wait to write this scene, (Which is why it’s so early, it was supposed to be later in the story, it really was) and it HAD to play out like this, it really did. Because it was there, in my mind and I was SO excited to write it just like this, so I had to. I’m sorry if you’re disappointed. By the way, I know Naomi doesn’t talk like this. It’s how it came into my head, so… I really just go with whatever I think up. Sorry.
Oh, and now that I think about it, for Escape The Fate fans, instead of Andy in here, Adam should have met RODNEY. How epic would that be? But I don’t want to drag in any more un-original characters… It’s honestly turning into one big commission. I even added in Andy.. and Carolyn is a song from Black Veil Brides… I’m actually kind of upset, because it feels like I’m running out of imagination, and I feel like I should really stop adding in characters I haven’t completely made up, especially if I get something wrong, or do something, or offend someone. …(But I’m babbling. AGAIN…) But I’m just adding in because I got excited about the idea. But then was all like ‘No, not ANOTHER un-original character, you always do that! Make up your own for once!’ (Or something like that..)
And I guess I should add in something else. Sorry for it being so short, again. It seems the chapters get shorter and shorter and farther apart. Though the ‘farther apart’ would be my internet’s fault.I couldn't click on anything and my copy-and-paste wasn't working, but it does now. Sorry about them all being later than you’re used to. Plus, I have to work on Science Fair, (which, if you'll excuse my language, is complete bs, in my opinion) like really badly.
Oooh, I already mentioned this, but I'm going to a TDG concert tomorrow. Whatever I can get, because they confiscate cameras at concerts (but not phones ) I'll post. I need to get video, too, so... But I'll see what I can do.
Enjoy and TDG for the win!
Oh, and now that I think about it, for Escape The Fate fans, instead of Andy in here, Adam should have met RODNEY. How epic would that be? But I don’t want to drag in any more un-original characters… It’s honestly turning into one big commission. I even added in Andy.. and Carolyn is a song from Black Veil Brides… I’m actually kind of upset, because it feels like I’m running out of imagination, and I feel like I should really stop adding in characters I haven’t completely made up, especially if I get something wrong, or do something, or offend someone. …(But I’m babbling. AGAIN…) But I’m just adding in because I got excited about the idea. But then was all like ‘No, not ANOTHER un-original character, you always do that! Make up your own for once!’ (Or something like that..)
And I guess I should add in something else. Sorry for it being so short, again. It seems the chapters get shorter and shorter and farther apart. Though the ‘farther apart’ would be my internet’s fault.I couldn't click on anything and my copy-and-paste wasn't working, but it does now. Sorry about them all being later than you’re used to. Plus, I have to work on Science Fair, (which, if you'll excuse my language, is complete bs, in my opinion) like really badly.
Oooh, I already mentioned this, but I'm going to a TDG concert tomorrow. Whatever I can get, because they confiscate cameras at concerts (but not phones ) I'll post. I need to get video, too, so... But I'll see what I can do.
Enjoy and TDG for the win!
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